5
was yes, since the first dead end!
Neve to be arrested in a city by the henchmen of the ruler. Good plan so far, I thought. Unfortunately, I had actually overlooked Arrion (how could this happen to me?). How Neve were arrested when their mobile one-man rampage machine next to her? Good question! A question that asked for the specialist thinking errors, dead ends, plot holes.
My cry for help was of course Darkchylde. Ready-made solutions can I get not at him. He claims that chunks of inspiration, and I choose that from which I can make the meanest. Really mean. But what does not kill toughens, rather Arrion, and you're long dead power nothing.
It is this scene, I have now reached.
Where is it written that an author must be kind to his characters? Right, nowhere.
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